| oct angel |
theme: fan senshi
Boy, it's been a while since I've done this!!
-the splash is very nice, but not necessary.
-the cliques creates a scroll bar and looks really bad. It shows up on my taskbar and I can't really get rid of it. what the hell code did you use?
-the red title background, most of 'the' is cut off.
-ookkkaayyyyy. navigation is the red arrows at the left. I see one arrow. I hit F11. it all makes sense. In the splash page you tell me this site works with 800 x 600. well, I'm telling you it doesn't.
-the intro sounds like crap. I hate reading things like this!
-the about section could have a divider, about the site and about Angel. Unoriginal you say? a take-no-crap confident girl with homocidal tendencies? that is a character our very own Ironmouse played in one of my old RPGs. blah.
-why is there a big space after the para and before the art?
-I have to keep this window (to type) and the site window open. I can't navigate unless it's full screen. this is VERY annoying!
-I got a couple broken links in the art section. check your thumbnails. A few pics opened in the frame and got rid of the navigation arrows, which sucks.
-I'll let you in on something. I despise fanfic characters. I really hate reading about them. It's so ironic that I Review gets a lot of these. *sigh*
-profiles are boring! write a paragraph! Chiara's face looks really flat.
-Prologue to Destiny's Angel gets me 404, as does character stats.
-use back buttons.
Mysteries abound in this dark tale of destiny, fate and love. welcome to BSSM. A UFO sighting heralds the arrival of a powerful group of aliens who intend to take over the earth. Season R part 2. In their way are three girls willing to die for what (and who) they love. Season 1, Jadeite time. But do they hold darker secrets than their secret identities? Tuxedo Mask, Rainbow Crystal time. One of them is about to learn you can never outrun your past...Haruka. What happened to originality?
-Just so you know, I'm not reading any of the fics. I never do.
-why do the adoptions have a white bg with your black bg? make a set of both. fix the field length of your form.
-the kiss dolls are cool. they don't really need their own section, could be used in the profiles, that way you arent repeating pics that are in the art section.
-hope to see us in the reviews section.
-the sitey stuff looks fine, but that...text effect..hurts the eyes here. might want to ditch it.
-you could put an I Review button with the other WPRs..*hint hint*
Overall....It was a site. not that great, not terrible. I don't like fanfic characters so this really didn't float my boat. but it didn't sink it either. the main problem was layout.
*sings* Oh, I'm about to get killed, I'm about to get killed, once my father sees my tattoos! *stops singing* Right, right, review time. Let's get to it!
A splash page-- a nice splash page, at that: a burning feather. Hey, are you friends with a psychotic midget goth-neo-punk chick who... oh, probably not. But this looks like something she'd do. Anyways... At least you give a frames warning-- I like frames warnings, 'cause it reminds me to open it in a new window. *grins* Oooh, the cliques button is right below the entrance...
Layout - Interesting menu bg, myfriend. Very nice. I like the general layout as well-- Orion's Senshi Generator KiSS doll for the girl? (I have that generator, as well as another one) Colors work well together-- black, whtie and red. Heh, looks like me on a normal dary-- lots of black and rend, and a little white. Name of the senshi is fairly basic, "Sailorangel", but I figure I can over look it in favor of the site look. Tis very nice.
About- Alright, I'm pretty sure it's not supposed to pop up in the menu frame, now is it? *checks the sorce* Aian sees the problem! you forgot to target the links. Not good. Now I have to open everything in new windows. Hmmm, DHTMLCentral.com? Nice place, even if I could never figure it out, pet. Hmmm... homocidal tendancies? Can Aian meet Angel? *psychotic grin* All in all, the About page is more or less a "why the hell am I doing this" page. I like those pages-- sometimes they're damn funny..
Art- Some damn fine art! Just for this, you get a clean bill of health! Er... Right... Ignore the sanity-challenged one over here... *stares drooling over the art for several hours*
Characters - Nice little intro-- let the people know whatcha doin' what each section is. Time to delve into it, eh luv? Hmmm, I don't think one peice of the name means what you say it does. Normally, the name's full meaning comes from both the person's name, and the family name.
Fics - I'm just gunna read the descriptions. I don't think you'd be able to wait for me to read the whole things... well, maybe a peek... Pet! I couldn't access the prologue for Destiny's Angel! Hmmm, nice writting style, though. *smirks* Interesting descriptions.
Adoptions - On a fan site? Oooo-kay.... adopting the TAP characters... never seen something like that before.
Fan art- Not Up
KiSS Dolls- I love playing with these things! I've got this mercury one... anyways... Ha! I was right! Who's the best! (just saying I was right about the KiSS doll Scout generator by Orion)
Reviews - Interesting page, you know, I've never seen someone make a page that linked to the reviews done by others. Niiiiice.
Sitey - Okay, first, what is WITH that name?! EVERYONE has a link called "Sitey"! Ohkay, calming down... so it's links to Adopt a Senshi, the awards TAP has won, the Content Policy (?!), Credits, the Senshi Exchange club, webrings, and award winning stuff... generally useless, excluding the credits, but then. I rarely read those anyways...
Diary - Diaryland... Using Evilrei's template... uh... anyways...
Links, Guestbook, contact - Not going there... Overall, it's a nice site-- everything stays with the same layout, and the layout fits together without looking tacky, although you should really get that link menu targeted so it can be viewed properly, luv.
¤ Nice splash image (how bout giving credit to the artist?), though the graphics could use a little work. A bigger font wouldn't hurt since not everyone uses a 800 by 600 res. Also, the splash page is rather useless.
¤ The navigation is horrible. Part of it is cut off, and I don't understand why normal links were not used. Once again, graphics could use some work, and I can't even read the text.
¤ Targeting your links would hurt since the links don't load in the main window. Since there is no horizontal scroll bar, I won't even attempt to waste my time reading it. Okay I give up. Some site are just so horribly made that I'm not willing to waste my time on them. Try previewing and proofing you site next time.
Splash page- This is rather plain. I would either add a small image or ditch it entirely. And where is the link to enter the site?
Cliques- I don't understand this. It's a chromeless window with no way for me to close it?
In closing- I'm sorry but I have no way of reviewing this site. I don't know how to get in it!
How am I supposed to review a web site that took their splash image down! If you apply for a review then you shouldn't be doing major renovations until all the reviews are done! I can't even get into your site, so how am I supposed to review it? A black background and a pop-up window with cliques doesn't tell me much about this site! Once I got into the pop-up window, I couldn't get out of it so I had to press <ctrl><alt><delete> simultaneously (so I could get out of the window). Why do you have requirements on your splash page when, as far as I know, you don't have a site!
From an angry,
Kaioh Michiru