| nov at last |
-This is supposed to be a re-review, but I dont remember the title or URL. *shrugs* This is taking forever to load.
-purple on black is hell to read. see Jadeite's Article on colours.
-the 'sailor rachel' image is broken.
-I really don't know why you took this site name, it really has nothing to do with the content.
-NONE of the layout images load.
-profiles are boring, no one reads them. oh, this is like, a short version. eh, it's still very boring. it only scratches the surface, like the first three episodes. the link stays in your frame, which is bad. never have links to other people's sites in a main section of your site, because then they will leave your site before looking at it.
-having to keep going back and forth is annoying. have one navagation thing, like this:
moon | mercury | Mars etc, at the end of each section.
It's as if this person has JUST discovered sailor moon.
the outers are all grouped together, which is bad. the text gets pushed into this TINY space by a huge picture that won't load. BAD! the style of writting makes me think it was copy and paste'd from someone else's site. it doesn't mention their current mission. blah. even the link to their profile is misplaced, it should be after sailor venus, before tuxedo mask. Starlights looks copied as well.
Only really popular sites should have a message board. lose it!
fics are in a message board, which is an interesting way of organising them. heh, the frog one is funny.
ugh, the guestbook is impossible to read. change the colours!
what is 'the directory'?
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i just had a matrix moment. -_-
The <title> is A-Z Scout Directory, so maybe it's a glossary. OH! after it finally loads, these are fansenshi. Rozeelia link is broken. this is badly organized, the links are too spaced out. the scroll bar and white background are ugly. fix! Sailor Galaxy is kinda already taken. I'm gonna submit my own scout. It loads into the small frame at the side, very bad. I opened it ina new link. Okay, I see. You fill out the information, then copy paste it into a message board box, then she sees it and makes the senshi picture and adds it to the list. I thought it was automatic. I suggest making an email form.
Overall, this is a very..early..site. This is a young person's first attempt at making a shrine to a new series she loves. Since this is so basic I'll be the only one reviewing it. My tips-watch more of the series. even the dub! that way you will have more information for more content. learn HTML. Don't host your site on home, go to angelfire, it's great and easy to use. Have smaller pictures, and more colour in the layout. Yup, most important is content. the fansenshi making thing of yours is great, keep it up.