Future Girls theme: otaku senshi

Fishuu ain't feeling too well at the moment. ugh. Anyway, this splash is different from last time i looked. the image is not centered, and this thing has no use at all. is this an otaku site? this is so useless it doesn't even tell me the name of the site. the layout is a bit disorganized. why is pictures first? pics-dear lord in heaven. are you colour blind?! that scroll bar looks hideous. the brightness..my eyes!! what is this, the Neon Senshi?! -_- the pics have no organization, put them in a table or something. it's really obvious you don't know HTML. sometimes the text goes over the pic. you need a 'home' button. why the hell does everything open in a new window? you really know nothing of making a site yet. why is mercury the only re-appearing original senshi? Profiles-what's up with the white bg? I like how the text is spaced. *yawn* these characters are all boring and completly unoriginal. no one reads profiles, they are annoying. Nyaga is a CereCere rip off. your villains REALLY need more character development. two sentences? is that all? CTS-hmmm custom transforming senshi? tres cool indeed! that must take some time. begging for a gb sign is pathetic. really, it's like forcing someone to like you. get a life! even though you've only completed two, requests are closed. ugh. at least say how many people are in line or why it's closed. story should be the first link people see. *reads* Usagi is the devil?! omg i was right! -_- this is one paragraph long. is that all you've got?! clique-look, yet another pointless splash. this is a lame idea for a clique, really. "I like naked anime characters but not in a sexual way!" right. the layout is the same as your main site, that bites. this is a seperate site so make it different. since the about opened in a new window, you know nothing about using pop-ups. grr. your members are yourself and your sister site. you need to make this clique worth something, then get out more. you've only got one site credited? riight. taikai radio asks me if i want to download the file. no. gb-two sigs, yourself and your friend. ah, the lameness of you. stop asking to be popular, you'll be so when you've got a site worth praise. Overall. first, learn some html. second, get some content other than boring fan senshi. i sound really harsh, but all i'm saying is this is a beginner's site that needs A LOT of work.

Due to annoying as hell Drivers Ed courses, I couldn't do this the day I wanted to. Bleh. Splash - Oh joy, a splash page. Can you feel the sarcasm here? Okay, besides being completely useless... There's a freaky background, with which I don't understand. And the letters are scary. Why are there hearts in the 'e's? The picture is obviously not tried to line up with the bg-- it cuts off the freaky girls. And why does the pink haired one remind me of Mano Yohko? Layout - I've seen this layout reworked a zillon times. *sniffles* Are there no more original layouts?! *wails and sobs for a few minutes* Okay, take what I said about the background, the letters, and the picture from the splash page, and attach it here. This is just... scary. Too much pink. Waaaaaay to much pink. Places Aian don't go - Email, gbook, credits, clique, CTS Pics - It's always until we get to the pictures that we find the Sailormoon stuff. Obviously, a number of these Otaku senshi pictures are edits. Although the chicks lacking of a normal bodysuit are great. *gringrins* Everyone should know I'm a hentai by now, ne? Some interesting names for senshi. Pandemonium... like in FF8? (okay, so I spent a few hours playing yesterday after I got back from Drivers Ed.) Heh, Shakai's cute. *evil hentai grin* Profiles - And, since I think she's cute, Pandemonium goes first. Oooh, I like that name. "Beautiful Devil". Ah, Sailor Orion's basic Sailor senshi profile chart. While the charts are nicely laid out, you should really try to rewrite it yourself; mostly to take out things you don't need, maybe put more detaisl in that you missed, or hadn't thought of when it was originally set up-- and to make it so that the writting doesn't cut off before it even reaches halfway across the page. Taikai's profile is better, but still not great. It looks kinda funny to me. Nyaga is like an animate-- not a senshi, except she tried to fool Taikai into believe she was? Interesting...Hey, if Shoshiro is immortal when resurected, wouldn't that make Saimin immortal, as well? Story - Uhm... right. Can I say that is a lame ass summary? No? oh, well, it is. I thought when it said 'story' there'd be a fanfic or something sitting there. And change the color of that damned scroll bar! It hurts my eyes! Taikai radio - an mp3? Is this like the fanfic, just done as a radio play? While fun to play around with (especially with really good stories) unless I've got a story tor ead before hand, I don't bother with radio plays. Okay, everything opens up into new windows. I don't like that, because too many windows open, means the computer will crash, and I've already got four open. (the site, this review, FF.net Original Novel, FF.net Final Fantasy Eight story). Try using "_parent" it opens it right into the whole window, overriding frames.

¤ The background is not seamless, needs to be faded more, and is not asthetically pleasing at all. The title picture needs to be tansperant, and has less than desirable compression. Your requirements are standard, and I doubt your site used java, probablly only javascript. Sadly enough, this splash has not managed to load fully without errors, but wait this is made with pagebuilder, I should have expected as much. ¤ Well I can tell this will be a long trip... This main page layout is horrendous. Learn to use transperacny and opactity and compression! Why it there a black star and outline, and white and grey title? They don't match with pink and green so do not use them. What the hell is 'CTS'? Do not use made up accronyms. You do not need to open each section in a new window, self loading will suffice. What relevance does the name of this site have with anything? ¤ Oh dear lord. Obviously trying to explain the concept of colors that match will be lost on yo so let me get to the piont: the scrollbars are hideaous. Learn to use thumbnails and a graphics program properly. This is just a compliation of badly coloured coloring book pictures. There is no rhyme or reason. The rist picture is labelled Taikai, which looks like a mispelling of Taiki who it definatly isn't and the senshi uniforms are not even standardized (i.e. Pandemonium has purple bangs in one picture and green in another). These names are not original and look as though ypu randomly choose large words, of whose meanings you do not comprehend (or so it seems since the names and costumes have no relevance to each other). You do not need two pages, one will suffice (with thumbnails or text links...use text links since you will most likely end up injuring yourself if you attempt thumbnails). While on the subject of text, it is impossible to read anything on this background. ¤ If Neo-Mercury and Hydra do not have bios, then do not list them. If you do not have an English Translation, do not include that field! USE COMMON SENSE! Someone cannout have a 'curvaceous and sensual' build; use the rules of grammer. The way you information is presented, you make it seem as though Takai delineates 'Defender of the Ocean', which it does not. The justification is horrednous; do not autmatically center everything. Potstickers are Chinese, and FYI Japanese and Chinese people hate each other so you biography is not practical. The sematic qualities of this section, and site in general, hint at you being less than 13. If this is true, then you should not even own this site. Okay, for a 13-year old, this Saimin girl is pretty open about her sexuality, and her costume is proposterous since she has nothing, topwise, to show off. You created these characters, yet are not sure what her 'realm' is. The " tags show up; check the syntax. If someone (referring to Pandemonium) is 'delicate and fragile' they would not be able to have 'well-toned muscles'. Okay so she is guardian of the supernatural...a bit more elaboration (what does 'pandemonium' have to do with the supernatural?). For a person who draws strength from darkness, this chick is a bit to vapid and happy. Why does she have a water orb? She is not a waterbased senshi. Shes is Korean right? Well I hope her name is Korean and not Japanese. Well atleast the Nyaga page is bearable as is the Shoshiro. ¤ Why must someone sign you misearble gbook in order to recieve a gif? Trying to scrounge around for a way to make yourself feel popular by having insincere entries? Only one complete request and a closed form. Impressive. ¤ Oh this will be fun, blue text on a pink background. Unoriginal story with no conclusion. ¤ Be happy since I am reviewing this clique which is a subsite, which I do not technically have to review. The splash is uneeded as is the pop-up. The frames and drop down is uneeded as well, either use frames or a drop down not both; you are defeating the purpose of both when you use them together (they are both meant to save space). Learn to target frames, oh wait we don't want to overheat the brain cells by using them, silly me. After reading the about section for this clique let me just say that this clique is utterly redundent and pointless. Once again, fishing for gbook entries. Pathetic, you are coming of as a tad bit desperate; not good for your image. The box for the code needs to be wider, make it wide enough that someone can read it with ease. In the 'join' form, don't make the labels be soley indicated in the fields, you can put text next to the fields. Work on the alignment. Impressive members list; yourself and the one other person who has requested a transformation gif. ¤ In the credits, the 'kawaii pic of taikai' is uncredited. ¤ ...Taikai Radio? What the hell? This isn't even a broadcast, only a huge playlist or so it seems. No one, even a person like me with cable wants to waste so much space for you pointless playlist. I'd probably care if you bothered to list the playlist, bur since common sense isn't your strength, why bother? ¤ As far as I can tell, this site has absolutly no potential for growth and is only a drain on webspace. There zero redeeming qualities. This review does not contain my full thoughts since after the first three pages I felt defeated and realized the impractiality of typing all the errors and incoherenices on this site. If you wish to make this site bearable, learn webdesign and perferrably html, how to utilize a graphics program well, and take some art/ color scheme/ interior design classes.

Crash Count: 2 Notes: Is there a rule about reviewers signing the guestbook too? My first visit involved a blank screen, and I had to look at the source to get in. But, Fishuu made me persevere, and here I am trying again. Splash. Splash bad. Also, the image editing is rather splotchy in places, and dosn't blend into the background like (I assume?) it was supposed to. Ahh, more of the same image editing. The black and grey shades on the top really don't work well with the pink used thruought the rest of the page. Pics: Various recolored images, except for one or two I'm unsure of. Don't get me wrong, most of them are well recolored, but I'm not huge on recoloring in the first place. On a more objective note, you could use thumbnails here. The profiles are stats, and I honestly can't stand stats. I can't stress that enough, I hate stats. Hate stats. Did I mention that I hate stats? Cts is Custom, just so you all know. Ahh, custom transformations. Those can be such fun. But what sort of a rule is "Must sign G-book"? Story is a bit short. But original, granted. Now, thruought this site I've noticed a greeen-and-aqua scrollbar. That's all well and good, if that's your color scheme. But this is pink, people, and that makes the scrollbar look scary. The clique. Linking to your own splash pag is sort of redundant, it would be better to link directly to the pop-up, either that or to a redirect. The pages all open in new windows, which makes me question why you have a pop-up with frames in the first place. Again with the "Must sign guestbook" rule. Credits are good.

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