The Princess Diaries theme: Rini

the size of my caring about how many visitors you've had does not equal the size of your counter. nor do i care when your site started. this splash is USELESS! rar. i like the scroll bar colours. I'm pretty certain naming a Rini shrine after a disney movie is a silly thing to do. why is rini glowing green? is she radioactive? that would explain a lot. i don't like your font. it is boring. hhmm, there is no pop-up, just a little thing saying the site is hosted by freewebz. neat. The punctutation needs work, too many exclamtion marks and bad spacing. make the intro shorter so i don't see the scroll bar immediatly, it looks better. the picture is really fuzzy, there are tons of better quality ones around. ooh nice link effect. argh, centered text! nnooo!! okay, so that ad thing is on every page. no biggie. The profile type info is silly, i mean, i can see what colour her hair is. hey, even the school uniforms are here. neat. get those other characters up, pictures of them aren't hard to find. the colour idea is ...neat..but since you are mostly an NA site you might as well lose the japanese stuff. these terms are pretty obvious. this is a site designed for someone who has never seen sailor moon, and it's really pointless/boring since most people have seen it. the centered text makes it look especially bad here, badly organized. you make this mistake a lot, it's spelled Japanese. helios is a man? he looks only a bit older than rini. they are fine together, to me. your opinion on the incest thing makes good sense. space the sections out more. this font is so ugly! i expected difference in her personality. again, this is just repetition since all sailor moon fans already know this stuff. it's the best thing in the world on a site where you know nothing about the series, but on a sailor moon site it's lame. I need a yahoo account to view the gallery? that's not good. i understand you have better things to do than thumbnail stuff, but that's what text links are for. i dont like them either. *blink* i have reached a restricted area? pah. I don't think rini would call herself a scout! such a derogatory term. since this is named the princess diaries, I expected a lot more than two entries. this is kinda like fanfiction so i'm not gonna read it. i can tell you why no one is joining your rpg, it's has an unoriginal plot. no one is going to bother with someone like that. think up a totally original premise. then have VERY clear rules and expectations. then advertise your behind off. I used to own an rpg, i know what it's like! narr, another empty fan section. i hate these. if you have nothing, go to fan art sites and ask permission to display their work. the chibi project banner looks horrible, don't they have buttons? it should be in the links section. actually, rini DOES want to be just like sailor moon. ha, friends are for the weak. i can hear her saying that! top ten list isn't funny at all. just repitition. woohoo, i am evil dark lady! yeah! i am also rini. these are fun, neat questions. you only have one sister so don't make it plural. hey, where is IR's link? *pout* make your buttons standard size 88 x 31. pah, review awards..grr. same thing as a link button! the bg is an awful colour. my grep name is none of your business. blech. Overall, this is was an unoriginal site. the stuff here is the same stuff as on every other sm shrine and it's boring. I liked the layout, nothing was stolen, there was an obvious effort put into it, but it still needs some original content. get a gimick that'll keep people coming back.

Joy. "Rini". May I kill her? Please? Splash - How many times do I have to say this? Splash pages are Useless! Especially ones with the Spore on them! *eye twitches* Must... Resist... mind-numbing pleasure... of killing... Spore... (I use that same shade of pink in the Xelloss pop-up layout I'm using for The Storyteller...) Layout - Since this is not a pop up layout, I feel justified in saying, once more, the Splash is USELESS. (See, see, BOLDED text!) For my sanity, I stick the text box where I write this, over the Spore, and... there we go! Layout's pretty basic; Links on one side, text on the other. Places Aian Just won't go (for the sake of her sanity) - Key Terms, Rini's Gllaery, Rini's Diary, Sisters, Linkage, Awards, Guestbook. Information - About Rini: *stares at Fishuu, and whines* Do I have too? *Fishuu cracks a whip at Aian* Alri, alri... Uh, why's the scroll bar pink? It doesn't really fit the black and white layout...Rini has her 995th birthday in one of the specials of the manga, Brandi. Have you not read them? ... Oh right, you're a dubbie. Rini's forms: The only thing good about the Spore is Black Lady. She's hot, AND evil! *drools for a few moments* Opinions on rini: Why in the world would I hate Chibusa for her looks? I hate Chibiusa for varying reasons... Her existance means Usa-chan CAN'T marry anyone else but the dipshit, Mamoru. I hate Chibiusa, because I hate Mamoru. *gags for a moment* Pink is so not the best color. How could anyone think that? Now... black and white... As for Chibiusa being raised as a princess, you forget, that Princesses are raised to be polite and courteous. All I see is a spoilt brat, who failed those leasons. I do believe Usagi is "Neo Queen Serentiy" when Chibiusa is born, not "Princess Serenity". Oh, but Rini is Evil. She is the embodiment of the Usagi/Mamoru couple. Mamoru is evil. And not the good, cool kind of evil, like Seifer Almasy, or Ichijouji Ken, or Seto Kaiba... I'll agree with the Chibiusa/Helios thing. Helios needs to be shot for being a pedophile. He's UGLY!! How can you think he's good looking? And those, were my opinions, in response to Brandi's. Differences in the series - It's Wicked Lady in the dub, Black Lady in the original, Brandi. I will agree that I like Manga-Chibusa a lot better than I like the Spore/Anime version. "Lita" is a dub name, my dear. Her Original name is Makoto. Mina is short for Minako. You spelt Setsuna correct. (It means "Moment") SailorMoonC RPG - Sounds pretty lame, if you ask me. It's the basic "Sailormoon RPG". Come on, be adventureous! Think up something new and original! But, in any case... I'd be Dark Lady. Mwhahahahahahahaha.... Fandom - *sings, horribly out of tune* Blankies... Always so... Blankies... humor - *pouts* She'd say black was her favorite color as Black Lady. Or as a teenager. Have you ever noticed that a number of girls who had a pink obsession as little girls, become goths? *points repeatedly at herself* Fun stuff - Oh gag me with a spoon. A quiz. What's with quizes? I only ever find them on these backwater websites, never on the domains... Coloring pages, Whoopie. I, personally, prefer to draw, scan, edit, and cg my own pictures, thank you very much. Oh look, I'm done. *sings* Joy to the world, the Spore is dead! *stops singing* If someone would make a fairly reaosnable reason for me to like her, I'd be happy. But most reasons just fall through when I compare other people's opinions to mine. I have been known to change my opinions from hate-to-like/love (*cough*Motomiya*cough*Daisuke*cough*) when someone can write me a very nice story. Ble-ah, I'm outta here!

¤ The counter really needs to be aliased as does the text on the button. Color scheme/ layout theme direly needed. The font colour and picture color do not match...they clash. Believe it or not, using caps at the propper time is helpful. Useless splash; only lists standard expected requirements. Spaces are needed between the different clauses in the requirements. The last requirment is silly and makes me regret agreeing to review sites like this. You are breaking the ToS for freewebz by not including the link (but I'm willing to lt that slip since I do the same). ¤ ...Is there a layout? I guess not... I understand that it's irksome to upload each file one at a time, but that is no excuse to have such an unasthetically pleasing site as this. Your graphics compression is nothing short of horendous. Oh goody, more of that annoying pink font! Proofreading is needed; I've noticed that the shift key and space bar must be you enemies. At least the freewebz link was added... No updates so I habe no idea when this was last updated (maybe durring the War of Roses?) or what was added and etc. HOLY SHIT! What have you done to the mouseovers! White on pink is not my idea of legible. Lastly, do not switch typface so much (the menu is verdana, but the content is times). The name of this site is irrelvant since this is not presented in diary form or predominently deals with diaries. ¤ This space and no caps thing is really starting to annoy me; it ruins the fluidity of the site. Bold, size 10, serif fonts give me a headache. Use san-serif. Why is everything centerd? ...I looked at you syntax...damn, learn html properly; you don't close you tags. Enough technical doublespeak... This information has been presented on 108384.24 other sites, more please (please sir, can I have some more?). Her eyes are red, their is not an inkling of brown. Her aliases are not Usagi, Serena, of Princess Serenity. You forgot Wicked Lady and Neo Princess Serenity. Your bias dissrupts the presentation of information. How can you forget that Wiseman was the one who helped her transform into Blacklady (FYI: that is as important fact)? Eloquent is spelled and used incorrectly. Speech or mannerisms are eloquent, people are not. You might have meant sophisticated or discreet. Springs foard? What? You mean forward? ...Yadda yadda...why do you bother to even make such a half baked site? This inhales profusly... Your ignorance is disgusting. ¤ The forms section has numerable mistakes but frankly, this site is not worth my time to pick them each out. You don't show any of the manga outfits. ¤ The 'key terms' section is more of an items/ attack list. You never mention "Kitty Magic" ot "Tiwinkle Yell" or the 'classic' season. It's not Luna ball, it's Luna P. A fuku is not a word invented buy 'fans of the original series'. It is Japanese for outfit. The senshi wear fukus. Getused to it, and get you bigot, conservative head out of the sand. Crystal Tokyo is the 30th century empire ruled by Neo-Queen Serenity and King Endymion. The Moon Kingdom is the the domain of Queen Serenity in the past. ¤ Chibi-usa actually does have romantic interest in Mamoru. I do not understand why everyone assumes that Helios is a 'man'. Remember their is some interesting aging in SM (she is 900 remember). All we see is one fascade of him. Some of these opinions have eleaboration so I must congratulate on that (don't get too happy though, I only said some... oh what the hell, go to the field, that's some of the only praise you'll probablly get). ¤ In the dub Chibi-usa is not displayed as a 'spawn of evil'. In Japanses she is Blacklady, in other languages she is Darklady, and in English she is Wicked Lady...get it? Minako and Makoto also undergo name changes. Haruka becomes Amara. ¤ If you do not have time to thumbnail 169 pictures, why did you bother stealing them in the first place? You could use text links. No pint in reviewing something you didn't do. ¤ These diary entries contain incorrect, biased opinons. ¤ You plee for your RPG is pathetic. How can Blacklady exist separatly from Chibi-usa? Simple, she CAN'T! ¤ Since there are not fanworks, don't list the section until you recieve submissions. ¤ The ideas for the 'Top 10 List' and 'Things You'd Never Hear Rini' Say' are completly stolen from Merc, but they suffice. ...You link to an outside site in your humor section? Do you not have enough creativity to make you own sections? ¤ Well according to your quiz, I am most like 'Evil Darklady'. What like there is a 'good' Blacklady? I wonder what site this colouring page was stolen off of. ¤ Okay, you provide an email form, but no email address... Also, why is the contact section listed under 'fun stuff'? It's not fun... stapling myself is more entertaining. ¤ One sister... man you are SO popular! Actually sister sites are not a way to measure popularity so this doesn't even matter. ¤ I can't tell exactly by looking, but these buttons do not seem to be standard 88 x 31 size. Not many links. I'm sure that if you spent 5 min. looking you could find at least 10 more good links. ¤ Well the awards section is satisfactory. ¤ Overall, needs work and a hell of a lot. Learn to code PROPERLY. Learn grammer and punctuation especially. Watch SM and learn what carefully observe the complete plot. Learn to make graphics. Add credits, contacts, and updates among other things. Wow, that was fun wasn't it?

Notes: Charming, rational, and easy-going little Rini shrine. Also, keeps her dub and her NA very seperate. Crash Count: 0 Splash pages are not your friends. Entering, the picture is poorly anti-aliased, so we have this lovely green halo. It wouldn't work so badly, were it not for the fact that there's no green anywhere else on the page. Aside from that, it's also rather grainy. I'd suggest a bit of light editing to make it smoother. The intro paragraph is nice and streamlined. But, you probably could have left out the line about people hating her. (Note: Nine hates Chibi-Usa. Hates.) About Rini has very brief stats, followed by a paragraph or four telling Rini's story. This is what I like to see in profiles, ladies and gents. In Forms, there's a lack of BR tags where they should be. Coding-wise, it's very inconsistent, but the author tries her best not to mix her information and still have as much of it as she can.   In "Key Terms", the author would do well to seperate the words from their definitions, possibly with a bold or italic font. The "Opinions" is rather sub-par gramatically, but it has a lot of very good points, and she's a lot more rational about it than a lot of Anti-Chibi people. She also has one of the best explainations for the eye color that I've ever read. The author is collecting anime/manga and Japanese/English differences, for reference. This is a good idea, especially for a dub-based page, as well as one based around a charatcer who's pretty inconsistent between anime and manga. She does go off-topic, but she has the important stuff, about the character differences between Manga Chibi-Usa, Anime Chibi-Usa, and Rini. She has a very large gallery, even though you must be signed in to yahoo to view it. The result is organized, but it doesn't fit well with the rest of the site, and is a bit slow-loading. The Diary is a feature I see often, but the author does a very good job of getting into the character's head. The Chibi Project banner causes a scrollbar, under Humor. perhaps you could use a button or text link instead? The humor is the token 'Things you'll never hear Rini Say" And, of course, 'Top Ten Lists." Not the most original humor sections ever, but the lists are really cute. (The number one reason for people to hate Chibi-Usa is because she's cuter than they are. I feel wounded.) The rest is pretty token. The buttons aren't really standard size, but not that poorly designed. To close? I HATED the movie The Princess Diaries. But, hey, it's not a bad site. The author proves that not all Rini fans are obnoixous, and that they can be reasonable and educated about things. She admits Rini's faults as well as her strengths, and I like that. Gramatically, it's rough around the edges. But with a little technical work, great things happen, dearie.

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