theme: Naruru & Ruruna
¤ Well there is no splash and the layout is descent in 1024 x 768 resolution, but the text size is pushing it a little. Original graphics are needed, the page is text heavy. Updates are always nice. Why do you have links on the right and only five of them? What happens when you get more? What will happen to them then? Also, spell Lycentia's name right...for Christ's sake, it's in the url. Every thing is justified center except the clique; odd. The 'does it look good' joke or whatever you have going on is corny; take it out.
¤ Well the information is not very informative, but I have to admit I've never heard of Naruru or Ruruna before. (Interesting that Naruru's last name is Osaka, if i recall correctly Naru's last name is also Osaka.)
¤ In the summary you spell 'comes' and 'supposed' wrong. Okay I can't tell if this story is real or fabricated, it seems doubtful that this sequence occurred.
¤ The links are not cute. They are irritating. Why not give a description of the picture instead of an annoying emoticon. The third graphic is a broken link and the fourth is not linked.
¤ If you do not know your own blood type, why bother mentioning it on your profile? Why not add your contact info on you profile too, for accessibiliy purposes (better yet, on the bottom near your gbook on every page).
¤ Your button is pretty good, but not is standard size. There are no faq's so why bother to add a subdivision for them?
¤ Well at least this was quick review. A lot more information is needed (if this is a real subplot, give volume and act numbers and make the summary more comprehensive). The site is okay, but the links on the side seem out of place (add them under the extra perhaps). On a whole the layout isn't too bad, but the bright seafoam and blue links do not contrast well and the site is text heavy. Also, originality is lacking, this is like most other shrines I have seen.
Whoo! No Splash page!
Layout - Blue. It's very bluish. Blue links, blue table. Excellent. At least I'm not dealing with psychotic Chibiusa pink right now. Praise Foon! Oh look, we're in the links menu ^.^V Thanks, luv. I like the picture of Naruru and Ruruna... I think I read the story of those two before, but I can't remember because it was a long time ago. Therefore, it is time to learn more!
Info- Of course, not much info is known about them. They're just side-story characters, ne? At least we know their civilian names.
Summ - Yeah, that's the story I was thinking of. It was weird. I don't think that's much of a summary, more like it's a retelling of the story.
Multi - The pictures are cute. I like them. Well, until you get someone to voice Naruru and Ruruna, I guess that those four pictures are all that's here, eh Pet?
me- *grins* Standard Profile? How... cute.
Extra - Your button, and your email? Ah, shishi, emails are from hell. Honestly. Okay, maybe not but... I'm rambling, aren't I? *smirk* I seem to do that alot...
I must admit that I’ve never seen a shrine devoted to Naruru and Ruruna before. I don’t know much about them, except a little information I can vaguely remember from “The Tomb of the Little Known Senshi”, so unfortunately I won’t be able to correct any of your information if it’s wrong, but I’ll do the best I can to judge other aspects of your site.
Layout: There’s nothing really wrong about the layout, but it is rather plain. I realize that it’s probably difficult to find pictures of Naruru and Ruruna, but your layout limits how much information you can put into one of those tiny boxes before the picture starts to look out of place. <I hope that made sense> It’s nice to see a link to “I Review” on the main page.
Main: Is navigation really on the “right”, I saw it on the left. I don’t think you need to specify that “summ” stands for summary, “multi” stands for mutimedia, ect. People are stupid, but not stupid enough to not be able to figure out what those mean. The first paragraph in the welcome message looks like an English teacher’s worst nightmare, let me see…the following errors occurred in your first paragraph alone: spelling, capitilization, you treat a verb as a noun (notices when it should be noticed) and sentence fragments. On top of that the “view” half of your guestbook text is spelled wrong. I can’t stand it when people don’t have reasonable spelling and grammar skills! You’re not giving people a good impression with the first paragraph.
Info: If all you know about their characters is their names and that they like shopping, than why do you have a profile? I thought that profiles for Sailor Moon and Sailor Jupiter were bad enough, but these tell me nothing more than their names, that they like shopping and what the web mistress doesn’t know.
Summary: This section is even worse in terms of spelling and grammar. You use certain words when you should be using others like “where” instead of were, lack of capitalization for proper nouns, spelling errors that could have easily been fixed like “classmatets”, “Ccomes”, “meeet” and numerous others. If you have a serious problem with spelling then put it through a spell check and check it over yourself for errors. The following phrase just doesn’t seem right “the shop owner being punked” it seems as if a better word could be chosen than “punked”. Ugh, this section of your site one big paragraph.
Multimedia: How could you have a total of four pictures and have two not working? I mean four pictures aren’t that hard to keep track of! Maybe you should have your e-mail address on the multimedia page so people can send their auditions strait to you. The idea of auditions for the voices of Naruru and Ruruna is a unique idea, though I'm almost positive I would never take the time to download the clips(or try out).
Me: One thing I despise more than anything else are a few shoddy details plopped down on the page about someone like “fvorite” colour, heck you didn’t even spell favourite right. If you’re going to tell me about yourself, then at least put down something I actually want to read.
Extra: I like the banner, but you need a standard sized 88x31 button. I have a FAQ question, what is the significance of the name “Hard Candy”? I like the name, but I don’t know what it has to do with the two characters your shrine is based on.
Overall: I would never come back to this site. It has nothing to offer me that I didn’t already know from “The Realm of the Little Known Senshi”, the spelling and grammar are horrendous, two of the four pictures don’t work and there’s practically no content. I know that Naruru and Ruruna are very minor characters, but certain things could certainly be elaborated on, for example:
Why are Chibi-Usa, Naruru and Ruruna friends? And for that matter…
Why are Naruru and Ruruna friends?
Why was Hotaru so jealous?
Why do you like these characters or think they deserve a shrine?
What volume of the Manga does this come from?, ect.
The worst part of your site, by far was the spelling and grammar. I fail to see how you couldn’t have used a spell checker before posting your site. No offense, but the site looks it like it was thrown together in a few hours.